Internet is a big network which is formed by connecting multiple small networks.It is a platform for all the users which are connected to it.Internet act as platform in different fields. Such as:
Internet as a collaboration platform.
Internet as a online entrepreneurship platform.
Internet as a education platform.
Internet as a online money transaction platform.
Internet as a news and latest event describer platform.
Internet as a collaboration platform
Internet act as a collaboration platform as you can send and receive messages, emails and you can also chat with one another person. You can also make online calls and video conferencing with other fellows.So that you and your friends collaborate with each other while you may be at one corner of the world and your friend may be in other corner of the world.
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This is a better way to communicate with your fellow which is in other part of a world.
This is a priceless, effective and efficient technique of communication.
Internet as a online entrepreneurship platform
Internet act as a online entrepreneurship platform as you can start your online business and can also perform online marketing of you product. You can also work as a freelancer while sitting in you home and doing your job for a organization which is in any part of the world. So that no traveling problems for you. You can earn money while working comfortably from any where.
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You can earn money by creating your own blog, by putting advertisement of several companies product on your website or blog,you can also make money by participating in online surveys.
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You can also make money by writing articles online.
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Internet as a education platform
Internet act as a education platform as you can learn online by searching on your require material or learn through distance learning, it mean that you can take admission online in any course or university and learn online by taking the classes of your course online.
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Internet as a online money transaction platform
Internet act as a online money transaction platform as you can send and receive money online through internet by using the services of
etc.So that you can send are receive money while sitting in your home comfortably and in very effective manner.
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simply signup to one of them and send and receive money while sitting anywhere .
Internet as a news and latest event describer platform
Internet act as a news and latest event describer platform. So that we get update of news and latest events without purchasing newspapers.It give us update rapidly without any delay while newspapers published once a day and you have to wait for next day to get update about new events and stories.
you can access thousand of e.newspaper of countries around the world without any cost.
This is a benefit of internet platform, even you can live watch online TV.
Your introduction, if we can truly call it that, is really bland. It does nothing to capture my interest to read the rest of the article. Why not recount a story where you were benefited by one of the platforms you highlight? If you can't get my attention in the first paragraph, how can you hope to keep my attention throughout the rest of the article?
Each of the descriptions of your "platforms" are more or less of the same caliber. Here are a couple of points that just jump out at me:
You mean I can become a heart surgeon in the comfort of my own living room just by taking classes over the Internet? Now where did that dog go...
Are there any limitations to online education? What about accredited schools versus non-accredited (in the U.S.)? Are there any disciplines which can not be conducted online? I can learn how to make gouda cheese from a YouTube video. Can I get a decent job by saying, "I learned how to secure a corporate network by watching these 5 YouTube videos?"
Am I just posting money out on the wire for anyone to grab? Why would I want to use such services? Would I send money to the butcher using PayPal so that later that day I can drop by his shop and pick up that leg of lamb I ordered? I would have expected to see some examples of where using such a service would benefit me outside of my daily routine.
Do understand that I am no professional author myself, and I am still trying to work out my own authoring style. I say all of the above as more of a "consumer" rather than a "peer". You've got a decent topic to work with; I think you just need to make it a bit more engaging and personal (with respect to opinion and/or experience).
Sometimes definitely needed such summary in topics, for me this was interesting.