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I wrote a speech on email spam where I talk of the problems it causes and a possible solution to it. It begins with the opening line:
"Today I want to talk about a problem that affects every single person in the US."
Do you guys have any ideas for a stronger openning that will grab my audience's attention. The one I am using is pretty weak and generic.
Also, I need some ideas for the conclusion. So far mine basically states that my plan will make the lives' of spammers suck and email will be enjoyable again. I need some ideas to make it more interesting, more conclusive (give a finishing feel to the speech), and possibly funny.
Any ideas will be greatly appreciated and thanx in advance.
"Today I want to talk about a problem that affects every single person in the US."
Do you guys have any ideas for a stronger openning that will grab my audience's attention. The one I am using is pretty weak and generic.
Also, I need some ideas for the conclusion. So far mine basically states that my plan will make the lives' of spammers suck and email will be enjoyable again. I need some ideas to make it more interesting, more conclusive (give a finishing feel to the speech), and possibly funny.
Any ideas will be greatly appreciated and thanx in advance.
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My introduction has many eye catching statistics such as the one's Bjorn mentioned. I am having trouble thinking of the first few opening lines of my intro that will lead into the statistics and such.
Just do a couple of bland lines of introduction like you've already suggested you have written and let the statistics provide the hook for you.
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As for the closing lines I'd recommend something like - Before you exit please leave us your e-mail for further contact....
What about coming on to the 'Spam' song by Monty Python?
Thanks ;)
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