Solved

Invitation letter

Posted on 2011-02-11
2
358 Views
Last Modified: 2013-11-19
Hi there. I have this invitation that I am doing for someone. I was wondering if someone can look at it and if you think you can make it even better please edit it to suit...Thanks... Thank-you-2.doc
0
Comment
Question by:slingingshot15
  • 2
2 Comments
 
LVL 76

Accepted Solution

by:
GrahamSkan earned 500 total points
Comment Utility
It's  outside my culture, but I would add two hyphens.

In my dictionary "Coordinators" is spelt "Co-ordinators", the hyphen being used to show the syllable split.

On the other hand instead of "a thank you dinner", I would use a hyphen to join the the words to show that the phrase "thank you" is to be used a single adjective, thus: "a thank-you dinner".



 
0
 
LVL 76

Expert Comment

by:GrahamSkan
Comment Utility
If I am forced to nit-pick, you should know that here is (or was) a feeling that infinitives should not be split.

Famously, this is done in the 'Star Trek' introduction - "to boldly go". Purists would say "to go boldly", so they would also "personally to thank" or "to thank personally" instead of "to personally thank".
0

Featured Post

IT, Stop Being Called Into Every Meeting

Highfive is so simple that setting up every meeting room takes just minutes and every employee will be able to start or join a call from any room with ease. Never be called into a meeting just to get it started again. This is how video conferencing should work!

Join & Write a Comment

I. Introduction In a previous article (http://www.experts-exchange.com/Web_Development/Document_Imaging/A_6537-PaperPort-Upgrade-How-to-download-and-install-updated-versions-of-PaperPort-11-and-12.html) (now deprecated), I discussed how to upgrad…
Microsoft Office Picture Manager was included in Office 2003, 2007, and 2010, but not in Office 2013. Users had hopes that it would be in Office 2016/Office 365, but it is not. Fortunately, the same zero-cost technique that works to install it with …
Learn how to set up basic frames and paths in Prezi and understand the open space that Prezi allows you to create presentations in.
Learn how to create interesting presentations by including videos to keep your audience engaged using Prezi. Select "Insert" from the top menu in your Prezi editor: Select "YouTube Video": Paste the video URL into the prompt: "Select "Insert":…

771 members asked questions and received personalized solutions in the past 7 days.

Join the community of 500,000 technology professionals and ask your questions.

Join & Ask a Question

Need Help in Real-Time?

Connect with top rated Experts

9 Experts available now in Live!

Get 1:1 Help Now