For the purpose of sending an email to encourage all employees to sign up for security awareness, our SAAS provider had provided an email template. It looks descent but I'd like it cleaned up and worded better, so that way I can send to all my employees. The template is below. Some of it is a bit corny. Can someone please edit it and word it better? I underlined what I want edited to word it better. Sorry, I am bad at sending a public email.
To All Employees,
Cybercrime is getting more serious by the month. The bad guys are getting quite smart about tricking people in clicking on fraudulent links in emails.
The company has decided that it is really important that everyone gets Internet Security Awareness Training. We need to defend our organization against cybercrime, and security is everyone’s job. Here is the link for everyone to do this training. Please have this done by __Wednesday?__ end of business. You do not need to let me know when you have completed it because I will automatically get the results as you do it.
Click this link to register:
Once you are logged in, click the ‘Start Course’ button and do the training. Thanks for your cooperation, and have fun, this is an interesting course to do.