Italian Gelato Party

Hello everyone, I am trying to 1) charge all our promoters to promote more with this ad, also I am tryhing to create curiosity with this ad so that everyone wants to come to this party . can someone help be to embellish this ad and make it irresistible please :) thank you very much.

Hello Everyone,

Next Saturday AREA3 presents: Sexy Italian Gelato Party. Dolci Gelati sponsor of the night will offer free delicious Italian Original Gelato to all our guests. Also, in order to make the event a little bit spicier the models Adam and Francesca will dress sexy and will serve the gelato. They also will be available throughout the night to take tons of pictures to make this night even more memorable.
I have attached the flyer for the event, it is ready to be posted on your facebook.
Please, spread the word and help us to make this night an unforgettable night because without your help it won’t happen.

Thank you for your help and cooperation for this special event,
ItaliabellaAsked:
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
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Next Saturday, AREA3 presents our Sexy Italian Gelato Party. Dolci Gelati, sponsor for the night, will offer free delicious Original Italian Gelato to all our guests. Also, in order to make the event a little bit spicier, the models Adam and Francesca will wear sexy outfits, and will serve the gelato. They also will be available throughout the night to take tons of pictures to make this night memorable for everyone.
 
 I have attached the flyer for the event and it is ready to be posted on your Facebook page.
 Please spread the word and help us make this night an unforgettable evening, because without your help, it won’t happen.
DaydreamsCommented:
Hello Everyone!

Next Saturday AREA3 will present a fun and exciting Italian Gelato Party! The evening's sponsor, Dolci Gelati, will provide delicious Italian Original Gelato, free of charge, to all of our guests.  We will make this cool party hot by having the gelato served by the sexy models Adam and Francesca, who will be available throughout the evening to take photos with guests! This will be one cool, hot, fun evening!

I have attached the flyer for the event, which is ready to be posted on your Facebook.

Please spread the word and help us make this event an unforgettable evening for all! I truly appreciate your help with promoting this event and hope you can stop by and enjoy some gelato if you like!

Thanks,
italiabella

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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Thank you both of you.
DaydreamsCommented:
You're welcome Italiabella, and good luck with your party!
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