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Correct the grammar for the below below paragraph

1) Correct  if something is wrong.
2)  Please let me know, Is it correct to add full stop(.) at the end of sentence for a highlight we wrote in resume.
 example below, first point :  -- -- - -----  Unix/Windows platforms.


      Around 10 years of Professional experience in Oracle Fusion Middleware Suite Administration on Unix/Windows platforms.
      Well exposure on Oracle DBA & Unix administration.
      Outstanding ability to quickly learn new technologies. Good at technical and functional knowledge to adapt easily any technical requirement.
      Extensive experience in deployment and configuration of middle tier applications, best practices in architecture, performance, high availability and in-depth troubleshooting.  
      Have experience in project management activities, such as interaction with vendors and documenting the technical and functional aspects of projects.
      Have experience working on site for various international clients (Malaysia, Zimbabwe and Algeria) for airlines product implementation. I handle challenging, high pressure situations with grace and professionalism.
      Below are my overall technical skill set - Admin - BEA WEBLOGIC, Fusion Middleware (ADF / OBIEE / SOA / WEBCENTER / OAM / OIM / ODS / FORMS / REPORTS) | Exposure to – Oracle DBA and UNIX - Admin  
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Thanks lot.

appreciate your efforts.
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any more inputs ?