Correct the paragraph for if any grammar mistakes

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This project deals with development of economy package for the hospitals to maintain their day-to-day business updates (transaction processing, financial statements reports … etc). They located at different geographical locations generate their daily reports and sent automatically to the Insurance corporate office efficiently with minimal end users interaction. This application package integrated with web site of the company to maintain information online.
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Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
Take a look at this....

This project deals with the development of an economy package for the hospitals to maintain their day-to-day business updates (transaction processing, financial statements reports … etc.). They are located at different geographical locations, generate their daily reports, and are sent automatically to the Insurance corporate office efficiently with minimal end-user interaction. This application package is integrated with the web site of the company to maintain their information online.
JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Thoughts for your consideration
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This project deals with development of an economical application package for hospitals to maintain their day-to-day business affairs (transaction processing, insurance reporting, financial statements reporting and so on). They have different geographic locations, generate their daily reports, and send forms and reports automatically to the Insurance company with minimal end user interaction. This application package will integrate with web site of the company to maintain information online.

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I think I have help with the grammar and sentence flow here, but it is a huge topic in a very small paragraph. You may wish to flesh out the idea more.
Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
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This project deals with development of economy package for the hospitals to maintain their day-to-day business updates (transaction processing, financial statements reports … etc). They located at different geographical locations generate their daily reports and sent automatically to the Insurance corporate office efficiently with minimal end users interaction. This application package integrated with web site of the company to maintain information online.
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Hi,

Please try the below and let me know if it's accurate. The one question I have is whether the "daily reports" include transaction processing and financial statements. Thanks  
-Steve
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This project involves the development of an economy package for hospitals to create day-to-day business updates (transaction processing, financial statements, reports, etc.). The hospitals are in different geographical locations. They generate  daily reports, which are sent automatically and efficiently  to the insurance corporate office with minimal end-user interaction. This application package integrates with the company's website in order to maintain information online.

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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
@mac_g - Thanks and I was happy to help.
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