Correct my english paragraph if there any grammar mistakes

===START==

How are you ?

its been long time since we had exchanged our mails.

I need some guidance from you in two aspects.

1) Canada immigration 2) USA immigration

1)Recently I sent my complete profile for technical evaluation to Matrix consultancy .Based on all my various parameters, they sent me a report asking to score BAND-8 to process further immigration for Canada.I have attached copy report for your observation.
please let me know how difficult to achieve such score.


2) please provide me guidance to process H1B visa incase if you have any idea.

If you have any more country to advice me for PR/Job purpose, please let me know.


I wish you all the best in your job.

== END========
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Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
===START==

Hello, how have you been?

 It has been a long time since we have last communicated.

 I need some guidance from you on two topics.

1) Canada immigration
2) USA immigration

 1)Recently, I sent my complete profile for technical evaluation to Matrix consultancy.  Based on all my various parameters, they sent me a report asking to score BAND-8 to process further immigration for Canada.  I have attached copy of the report for your review.

Please let me know how difficult it would be to achieve this score.


 2) Please provide me guidance to process an H1B visa incase if you have any idea.

 If you have any more countries to advice me for PR/Job purpose, please let me know.


 I wish you all the best in your job search.

 == END========

This was a bit difficult as it was hard to make out the meaning, but I think I've cleaned it up quite a bit.
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks for reply.. .. appreciate your efforts.

however, I did not get your last comment "----This was a bit difficult as it was hard to make out the meaning, but I think I've cleaned it up quite a bit. ---"

if it is something related to advice for my improvement ?
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larryhSr. Software EngineerCommented:
I would tweak what ScottCha suggested:

===START==

Hello, how have you been?

It has been a long time since we last communicated.

I need some guidance from you on two topics.

 1) Canada immigration
 2) USA immigration

1) Recently, I sent my complete profile for technical evaluation to Matrix consultancy.  Based on all my various parameters, they sent me a report stating I need to score BAND-8 to process my Canadian immigration application further.  I have attached a copy of the report for your review.

Please let me know how difficult it would be to achieve this score.

2) Please provide me guidance on how to apply for an H1B visa in case if you have any idea.

If you have any more countries to suggest for a PR job, please let me know.


I wish you all the best in your job search.

  == END========
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