Services ( Workshops & Web Page Design)

Hello everyone, these are the services I provide on my website related to Workshops & Web Page Design , can someone proofread/enhance/ embellish  thesee services please, Thank you !

Workshops

Learn Technology With One - To- One Workshops !

AAAAAAA is much more than an IT firm: it's also the best place to learn about your new gadgets! We offer one - to - one workshops to teach you the basic of the devices you own, or about new technologies you would like to master.  The format of each workshop is designed to help you achieve more than you would have ever thought possible, all at your own pace. Lasting up to one hour, each workshop utilizes a simple but effective demonstrate practice format: the trainer will demonstrate key principles, and then you will practice them. in addition to the full support of the trainer for the duration of the workshop, you will also receive customized documentation of for you to use outside of the workshops, thus ensuring you always have access to the information you have learned! So, what are you waiting for ? Pick the topic of your choice and start learning it today!

Web Page Design

New Website Development

Web development for new website, includes home page and 3 additional pages. Here are a few reasons why we should build a sleek website for your organization : 1)  Your potential customers can find out about you and any of your products or services online. If you get most of your business through networking and personal connections, then they will want to check out your website. 2) By having a website potentially thousand of people are going to see it. You are able to influence people's decisions and educate them. 3) More than 2.4 billions people use the internet every day, 90% of those have purchased something or contacted a company, online in the last 12 months. So by not having a website, you will be missing our on a big piece of the pie.

Development Enhancement to Existing Website

Building a website is the first step of a successful business. We provide monthly support to maintain update your website content in order to stay more competitive.

SILVER DESING PACKAGE (The Most Popular)

Description300 Business & Personal Themes, 10 GB Disk Space, Custom Home Page, Custom Content Page, Up to 5 Custom Pages, Responsive website design, Domain and E-Mail Setup.
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Mark BullockQA EngineerCommented:
Some suggestions:
Use one-to-one (without spaces) or another word such as private.
Remove spaces before punctuation ! and ? and :
"in addition" --> "In addition"
"of for" --> "for"
"for new  website, includes" --> "for a new website includes"
billions --> billion
"internet every day, 90%" --> "Internet every day, and 90%"
"company, online" --> "company online"
"missing our" --> "missing out"
"Development Enhancement" --> "Develop Enhancements"
DESING --> DESIGN
Description300 --> Choose from 300
JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Some thoughts for your consideration:
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AAAAAAA is much more than an IT firm: it is also a very good place to learn about your new gadgets! We offer one on one workshops to teach you the basic functions of the devices you own, or about new technologies that you would like to master.  The format of each workshop is designed to help you achieve more than you might have thought possible, and all at your own pace. Lasting up to one hour [[[can't teach everything in an hour]]], each workshop utilizes a simple but effective demonstration format followed by practice: the trainer will demonstrate key principles, and then you will practice them. In addition to the full support of the trainer for the duration of the workshop, you will also receive customized documentation of for you to use outside of the workshops, thus ensuring you always have access to the information you have learned! So give us a call, pick the topic of your choice, and start learning it today!

 Web Page Design

 New Website Development

We offer Web development for a new website including the home page and 3 additional pages. Here are a few reasons why we should build a sleek new website for your organization :
1)  Your potential customers can find out about you and any of your products or services online. If you get obtain most of your business by networking and personal connections, these customers will want to check out your website.
2) A website means that potentially thousands of people are going to see it. You will be able to influence people's decisions and educate them.
3) More than 2.4 billion people use the internet every day, 90% of those have purchased something or contacted a company, online in the last 12 months. So by not having a website, you will be missing out on a significant opportunity.

 Development Enhancement to Existing Website

 Building a website is the first step of a successful business. We provide monthly support to maintain update your website content in order to stay more competitive.

 SILVER DESIGN PACKAGE (Out Most Popular offering)

 We have 300 Business and Personal Themes, 10 GB Disk Space, Custom Home Page, Custom Content Pages, Up to 5 Custom Pages, Responsive website design, Domain and E-Mail Setup.

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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
WOW John and Mark It sad how many grammar error I was able to make in only two pages :). Thank you so much John for re-writing as usual all my services correcting and embellishing them. Mark you also caught many errors too. I can only imagine what people may have thought reading my services and thinking based on what this person writes he has no clue what he is doing ...instead it's not true ...I am only Italian and English it's not my native language.

John and Mark I have   one more sections that I would like you to revise about the services I offer. It's about Networking. I will assign the points for this post and open a new one.

Thank you again to both of you.
JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
@Italiabella - Thanks for the update and I was very happy to help you. Two or three sets of eyes on writing is always a good thing to do.
ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
you read my mind, I totally agree. I am so lucky that you are watching my back...John....
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