Services ( Networking)

Hello everyone, these are the services I provide on my website related to Networking , can someone proofread/enhance/ embellish  thesee services please, Thank you !

MANAGED IT SERVICES

In today's business, we relay on technology every day to keep networks reliable and operating at full capacity. Our certified network engineers help you manage your IT department so you can focus on your core business. With a monthly IT maintenance schedule, your problem are fixed before they even arise. Partnering with us will give you  peace of mind and greatly increase your productivity.

CLOUD SOLUTION

The Cloud has become a key technology innovation making businesses more mobile and collaborative. For most, the Cloud means: work from anywhere, increase collaboration, share resources, and reduce capital costs. But what does "the Cloud means for your Business ? At AAAAAAA we create Cloud solutions that increase the productivity and reach of your business. Whether   you come form a large enterprise or a small company, we can recommend cloud solution that meet both your budget and business requirements. Let us put you in the cloud.

NETWORK SUPPORT

Professional IT Infrastructure management is critical to streamline your daily operation. We will recommend, build and configure the right solution for you. We are specialize in both on-site servers and cloud servers setup, and are happy to work with you to find a solution that best suits your business goals and budget. We also research and recommend the ideal data backup solution for your organization.

NETWORK SECURITY  -  FIREWALLS IMPLEMENTATION

We understand the importance of having a secure network to protect internal company data and clients' personal information. To mitigate security risks, our network security is implemented at three level: 1) Configuring hardware devices like firewalls, 2) Protecting each server and workstation by installing antivirus software protection, 3) Training users about policies and procedures to avoid security vulnerabilities. We believe that being proactive and preventing a security treat is a better solution than fixing an issue.
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Mark BullockQA Engineer IIICommented:
relay --> rely
Our certified network engineers can efficiently manage your entire network so you can focus on your core business.
"monthly IT maintenance" --> "monthly maintenance"
Remove one of the spaces between "you  peace" and "Weather   you"
the Cloud means for your Business  -->  the Cloud" mean for your business
meet --> meets
are specialize  -->  specialize
NETWORK SECURITY - FIREWALLS  -->  NETWORK SECURITY AND FIREWALLS
level  -->  levels
treat --> threat

For security, do you scan servers for vulnerabilities and fix those?
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madunixCommented:
MANAGED IT SERVICES

In today's business, we rely on technology every day to keep networks reliable and to operate at full capacity. Our certified network engineers help you manage your IT department so you can focus on your core business. With a monthly IT maintenance schedule, your problem are fixed before they even arise. Partnering with us will give you peace of mind and greatly increase your productivity.

CLOUD SOLUTION

The Cloud has become a key technology innovation making businesses more mobile and collaborative. For most, the Cloud means: work from anywhere, increase collaboration, share resources, and reduce capital costs. But what does "the Cloud means for your Business? At AAAAAAA we create Cloud solutions that increase the productivity and reach of your business. Whether you come from a large enterprise or a small company, we can recommend cloud solution that meet both your budget and business requirements. Let us put you in the cloud.

NETWORK SUPPORT

Professional IT Infrastructure management is critical to streamlining your daily operation. We will recommend, build and configure the right solution for you. We specialize in both on-site servers and cloud servers setup and are happy to work with you to find a solution that best suits your business goals and budget. We also research and recommend the ideal data backup solution for your organization.

NETWORK SECURITY  -  FIREWALLS IMPLEMENTATION

We understand the importance of having a secure network to protect internal company data and clients' personal information. To mitigate security risks, our network security is implemented at three level: 1) Configuring hardware devices like firewalls, 2) Protecting each server and workstation by installing antivirus software protection, 3) Training users about policies and procedures to avoid security vulnerabilities. We believe that being proactive and preventing a security threat is a better solution than fixing an issue.
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madunixCommented:
"To mitigate security risks, our network security is implemented at three level: 1) Configuring hardware devices like firewalls, 2) Protecting each server and workstation by installing antivirus software protection, 3) Training users about policies and procedures to avoid security vulnerabilities."

This sentence is very long, consider breaking this into multiple.
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madunixCommented:
Make sure before listing your services, that you give a brief of your company profile and introduction.

1      Company profile
In 1995 ..........


2      Introduction
This document focuses on the design of a Managed IT Solution that meets your enterprise requirements.

Our model at YOUR COMPANY is that everyone strives to deliver and provide unmatched levels of services to customers. This is driven by our performance objectives where we position the quality of the service, the dependability to deliver it when the customer wants it, and at the pace that the customer desires, at the top, while we incorporate at the same time the flexibility and cost efficiency to the offerings and services. This is developed and maintained by our integrated strategy that spans across both the strategic and the operational divisions of our organization.
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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Thank you to both of you...
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