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Thanks for your follow-up.

I am started taking medication since 3-4 days as per your advice.
Not sure whether it is because of Office AC/other cold thing, My nose started again getting blocked. I wish to continue medication from here on.

If I feel extremely inconvenience like complete blockade of Nose, Sneezing ..etc I am taking medication 5- pills for every 2-hours around the clock as per your advice. Also, allopathy liquid drop medicine to relive sooner relief.
I want to root out this issue, as this directly effecting my nature of professional work in office.

Please let me know when should I give you next update.

To find the details of mine, please find R.No in in subject line to easily  track patient details.

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Excellent reply ... Thanks you.
I small clarification ....why you have used  word-"nevertheless" ?

"I nevertheless do continue to take the medication."
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yes, I understood.

for my original post how much rating you can offer out of  10 index ?
I would give it a 4 (though I am not native english speaker, btw)
lot's of words are correct, just also lot's of grammar and style errors that make the rating "low".
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Thanks for honest feedback ..!!
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Thanks for your follow-up.

I started taking medication 3-4 days ago as per your advice.  I am not sure whether it is because of my office AC or some other cold-related issue but my nose started getting blocked again. For this reason, I wish to continue medication from here on.

If I feel extremely inconvenienced like having a complete blockage of the nose, sneezing, etc. I will take the medication, 5 pills for every 2 hours around the clock as per your advice. Also, I will take allopathy liquid drop medicine for quicker relief.

I want to root out this issue, as this is directly effecting the professional nature of my work in the office.

Please let me know when I should give you my next update.

To find my details, please find the R.No in the subject line to easily track patient details.

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I am not exactly sure what the last line of your message is intending to convey.  Is the "R.No" the Rx, or prescription, number or a patient reference number of some sort?  Is this supposed to be part of an email subject line?