Correct the paragraph for correct grammar and sentence improvisation


I have started taking medication since 7th-of this month.
what I am thinking, better to review health condition as soon as possible.

Reason is, Incase you are thinking any alternative medication for betterment,One of my friend scheduled to come my place last week of this month, He can pickup and handover me parcel if required.

Therefore, please let me know how soon we can review health condition ?

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Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
I would like to help with this, but I have no idea what is going on in this letter.  It looks like it's a random collection of sentences that have something to do with medication and packages.
mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks for early reply..

i want doctor to review my medical condition as soon as possible,change medication if needed, so that my friend coming abroad (to my place) can handover me parcel for easy transport.
Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
I have started taking medication the 7th of this month.

I would like to review my health condition as soon as possible.

The reason is, in case you are thinking an alternate medication might be better for my treatment.  One of my friends is scheduled to come to my place the last week of this month,  He can pickup and handover my parcels if required.

 Please let me know when we can review my health condition?


See how you like this.  I think it flows a little better.
Leslie BloomCorporate & Product Marketing ManagerCommented:
I have been taking this new medication since the 7th of this month.

I would like to be review my medical condition as soon as possible to see if there are alternative medication options for my treatment.

A friend is coming to my home the last week of this month and can pick-up and transport my parcels if needed.

When is a good time to review my medical condition with you?

Thank you.

I think the purpose of what you are trying to say is to tell your doctor you want to talk about your medication and condition. I made the response very quick and direct. This will hopefully get you straight answers from your doctor.

Let me know what you think!

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