Retirement wishes

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Again, congratulations David  on a well-deserved retirement. Few have worked as hard as you have. I hope you will enjoy directing your energies into your other special interests.
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nobusCommented:
what is the question - if any?
mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
correct/improvise paragraph ....
Kanti PrasadCommented:
Hi
Here is something...

It has been a joy to work with someone so passionate, calm and professional all at the same time. We will miss your wisdom and experience, but most of all, we will miss the encouragement you have been to us. Let me tell you that retirement opens the door to new unexplored special interests and opportunities. I can’t come with you in your new endeavors, but my highest hopes for your future can! My best wishes on your retirement and you will be greatly missed.
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks Kranti for response..

I would prefer to correct/improvise the sentence I wrote above, but not from outside.
Kanti PrasadCommented:
Hi

The one you have above is correct. You can just add an '!'  interests.


Again, congratulations David on a well-deserved retirement. Few have worked as hard as you have. I hope you will enjoy directing your energies into your other special interests!
nobusCommented:
>>   I hope you will enjoy directing your energies into your other special interests.   <<  you could name a couple of the "special interests".
also naming a few of his colleges/friends helps giving it a personal touch
Tom BeckCommented:
Color me ignorant. I have an vague idea who "David" might with regards to EE be but it would be helpful to myself and others if you spelled it out. And retiring from what, EE, his professional career, both?
larryhSr. Software EngineerCommented:
mac_g:
correct/improvise paragraph ....
This is a small thing but I believe the word you intend to use is "improve" not "improvise".  
"improvise":   create and perform (music, drama, or verse) spontaneously or without preparation.
"improve": make or become better

Otherwise, the grammar, etc. of your original message seemed fine if you were writing it on a retirement greeting card.  If you were writing a letter then adding more details about your experience together would be appropriate.
nobusCommented:
what will it be used for?  on a card - or during speech?
Leslie BloomCorporate & Product Marketing ManagerCommented:
David,

Congratulations on a well-deserved retirement. Few have worked as hard as you have over all these years.

I hope you enjoy spending your new found free time on your personal interests!

Best wishes,
mac_g

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