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Dear Tim,
I found an interesting product under your company brand name - " LUX - Anti grey hair shampoo" .I am amazed after looking its features . Prior I checked-out this item from Amazon site, I would like to have some clarifications from you.

1. how many days one has to wait to see its results ?
2. Is this product effective for white beard as well ?
3. Does this product reverse the existing grey hairs or just stops further graying?

I am waiting for your reply ..
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Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
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Dear Tim,

I found an interesting product under your company's brand name: "LUX - Anti-Gray Hair Shampoo". I am amazed after looking at its features. Previously, I reviewed the item at the Amazon website, which resulted in these questions that I would like you to answer:

1. How many days does it take to see results?

2. Is this product also effective for a white beard?

3. Does this product reverse existing gray hair or just stop further graying?

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely,
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Some thoughts for your consideration.
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Dear Tim,

 I found an interesting product under your company brand name:  " LUX - Anti grey hair shampoo" .  I am amazed about its advertised features . Earlier, I had checked-out this item from on the Amazon website,  I would appreciate some clarification from you.

 1. how many days does one have to wait to see its results ?
 2. Is this product effective for white beard hair as well ?
 3. Does this product reverse the existing grey hairs or does it just stop further graying?

 I await your reply ..
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Michael-BestCommented:
Dear Tim,  / Dear Sir's, (more formal)

I came across an interesting product from your company brand of products on Amazon' site, named: " LUX - Anti grey hair shampoo" .
I was amazed after reading about it's features, and would like for you to clarify my following questions.

1. How many days does it take to see results ?
2. Is this product effective for white beard's as well ?
3. Does this product reverse existing grey hair, or just stop further graying?

I look forward tor your reply.

Sincerely,
"your name"



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Leslie BloomCorporate & Product Marketing ManagerCommented:
Hi @mac_g, I kept this very brief and straightforward for you. Hopefully this short blurb will help you get your questions answered fast.

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Dear Tim,

I stumbled upon your LUX – Anti Grey Hair Shampoo, and am amazed by its features. I viewed the shampoo on Amazon, but have some further questions for you:
1. How many days until you see results?
2. Does this shampoo work for white beard hair also?
3. Does this shampoo recolor existing grey hairs or does it just stop further greying?

I look forward to your response.

Thank you,
mac_g
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
@mac_g - Thanks and good luck with getting clarification from the supplier.
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