Final SoundC. agreement

Hello A.

I have revised the promotional agreement and made some changes as per your request. Please, revise the attached document and if there are no other revisions that you would like us  to do, sign it and send it back to me.

We are all very exited about this new and great opportunity,

Thank you,

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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Some minor thoughts for your consideration

I have revised the promotional agreement and made some changes that you had requested. Please revise the attached document and if there are no further revisions that you would like us  to make, please sign it and send it back to me.

 We are all very exited about this great new opportunity,
mrwad99Commented:
Here's my take.  I have added a "look forward to hearing from you soon" as I felt the bit about the new opportunity was a bit "naked" on its own.

Hello A,

I have revised the promotional agreement and made some changes in line with your request.  Please can you review the attached document and - if you are happy with my changes - sign it and send it back to me.

I would also like to add how excited about this new opportunity we are!


Thank you very much, I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
Hi Italiabella,
Rewrite below. Regards, Joe

Hello A,

I revised the promotional agreement, making the changes that you requested. Please review the attached revision. If you agree with everything in it, please sign it and send it back to me. If you want additional changes, please let me know what they are. I'm sure we can reach mutual agreement quickly.

We are all very exited about this new business opportunity with you!

Thank you,

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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Guys as usual is so hard for me to pick one of your answers, they are all so good and much better than mine. Thank you all for your prompt response.
Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
As always, you're very welcome — happy to help. Regards, Joe
BillDLCommented:
I was just having a read through the questions that I missed because I keep forgetting about this topic.
The word "exited" is the past tense of the verb "exit".  In context with the letter the correct word to use is the adjective "excited", meaning enthusiastic and eager.  mrwad99 picked up on this.  Just nit-picking, I know, but that's the nature of this topic ;-)
Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
Yes, this is a nit-picky topic — and that's a good catch! I recollect the exited/excited typo and thought that I picked up on it, but that must have been in a different instance, as my answer clearly didn't in this case.
Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
Yes, this is a nit-picky topic — and that's a good catch! I recollect the exited/excited typo and thought that I picked up on it, but that must have been in a different instance, as my answer clearly didn't in this case.
BillDLCommented:
Joe Winograd, Fellow&MVEDeveloperCommented:
Thanks for the link, Bill — I'll take a look.
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