proof read : issue while Downloading novel

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Dear Pal,

Thanks for your response.

The issue I have raised while downloading your E-books for novel "Titanic" still persist.

I am facing issue precisely in part-02 & 03.

please refer the attached screenshot for your better understanding, where I pointed-out exactly the location where links were broken.

I appreciate if you can arrange part-02 & 03 privately(one-one) rather from your website.

looking forward your help
mac_g
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Some thoughts to consider:
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Thank you for your response.

 The issue I have raised while downloading your E-book for the novel "Titanic" continues to persist.

 The issue specifically occurs in parts 02 and 03.

 Please refer to the attached screenshot I have attached here, where I have pointed-out exactly the location of the broken links.

 I would appreciate if you can arrange to send me parts 02 and 03 by email rather from your website.

 I look forward to your help
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks for your speedy response.
which is correct ?
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 "Please refer to the attached screenshot I have attached here, where I have pointed-out exactly the location of the broken links."

or

" Please refer to the screenshot I have attached here, where I have pointed-out exactly the location of the broken links."?
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Either one is perfectly good. Use the sentence you prefer or like best.
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks, your are really helpful.
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
You are very welcome and I was happy to help.
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