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Hello Friends,

This is an official invitation to join us on Saturday October 10th 2015 at BarCode for a double special night event!! We will be celebrating:

 1) The second anniversary of AREA3, the DC  promotion team that I am part of who has successfully promoted Lima, and now  Barcode and Soundcheck.

2) We will be learning salsa classes with the well know Salsa teacher Byron Morales. Italian Cake will be served to our guests!!

Doors open at 10:00pm to 3:00am

Text me or message me for FREE VIP list or to reserve your table.
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Hello Friends,

 This your official invitation to join us on Saturday evening October 10th 2015 at BarCode for a special double night event! We will be celebrating all of the following:

  1) The second anniversary of AREA3. This is  the DC  promotion team that I am part of which has successfully promoted Lima, and now  Barcode and Soundcheck.

 2) Salsa classes: We will be learning salsa classes with the well known Salsa teacher Byron Morales. And delicious Italian Cake will be served to our guests!

 Doors open at 10:00pm and will remain open until 3:00am

 Text me or message me for the FREE VIP list or to reserve your table.
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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Thank you John
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
@Italiabella - You are very welcome and Good Luck with the celebration
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