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Once I had experience the miscommunication. When I received my movie tickets these were of another movie. I called to the ARENA it’s a cinema in Bharia town Rawalpindi, for the booking of film “YA JAWANI PAHIR NAI ANI” tickets but unfortunately they booked tickets for “YA JAWANI HAI DEWANI”. Then I just went to the manger and complained. They apologized for that, and changed tickets as well as they served us the free caramel popcorns.
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Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
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Once I had experienced miscommunication. I received movie tickets, but these were to another show. I called to the ARENA, it’s a cinema in Bharia, in the town of Rawalpindi, for the booking of the film “YA JAWANI PAHIR NAI ANI” but unfortunately they booked tickets for “YA JAWANI HAI DEWANI”. Then I went to the manger and complained. They apologized for that, and changed tickets as well to the correct movie.  They also served us the free caramel popcorn.
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See how this works for you.
Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
Here's my version:
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I once experienced a miscommunication at the cinema ARENA, located in the town of Rawalpindi in Bharia. When I received my movie tickets, they were for another movie. I had ordered tickets for the film YA JAWANI PAHIR NAI ANI”; however, they unfortunately booked tickets for a different movie, “YA JAWANI HAI DEWANI”.

I complained to the manager. He apologized for the mistake and changed the tickets. In addition, they served us free caramel popcorn. I was pleased with the quick resolution of this issue.
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Scott CSenior EngineerCommented:
Better than mine.  ;-)
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Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
@ScottCha - Thanks! :)
BillDLCommented:
Looks like this question has been abandoned by another single-day, one-question member.

I once made the mistake of buying YA JAWANI HAI DEWANI instead of YA JAWANI PAHIR NAI ANI.  I was expecting a mildly spiced dish with saffron, almonds, and mango slices, but instead I was served with a spicy sauce that nearly burned my mouth off. They apologized and served us free aval nanachathu, ethakka appam, pal-ada, parippu prathaman, acchappam, and kuzhalappam for desserts.
BillDLCommented:
Time to close this question in the absence of the author, so I just split the points between you both.  BillDL
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