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The main focus of this application was to conduct a surgical and parametric study of the excessive overtime use. This monthly effort, which took about 2 weeks requiring number of meetings with various departments to come up with some resolution. This process was very arduous and never produced a complete and satisfactory resolution. The application demoed in this video reduced the two-week effort down to under 10 minutes. The interactive forms and reports in this application produced a very clear and precise actionable picture, right from a top of the office manager’s desk without involving anybody else.
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Mike EghtebasDatabase and Application DeveloperAsked:
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Some thoughts for your consideration
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The main focus of this application was to conduct a surgical (?) and parametric study of excessive overtime. This monthly effort took about 2 weeks (total or per month) and required a number of meetings with personnel from various departments to come up with a resolution. This process was very arduous and never produced a completely satisfactory resolution. The application demoed in this video reduced the two-week effort to under 10 minutes. The interactive forms and reports in this application produced a very clear and precise actionable picture. The office manager could review the results without involving anybody else.

Comments:  what does "surgical"  have to do with overtime?  I did not understand the context, so it should be clarified.

Also, clarify 2 weeks total or 2 weeks per month.

Otherwise, I have smoothed out the paragraph and I hope it helps.

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Mike EghtebasDatabase and Application DeveloperAuthor Commented:
I removed the work surgical. Also, I changed 2 weeks to  Changed to  2 weeks permonth

Thanks,

Mike
JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Thanks Mike and I was happy to help.
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