Hello can someone proofread this email and possible embellish it. and make this invitation irresistible .... Thank you
Thank you everyone for the great night we had last night at XXX. A special thanks you goes to those of you who when to the concert such as Ramiro, Michaelanggello, Lisa, and Luis ( I apologize if I forget someone else’s name) who were able to involve and route numerous people to our venue after the concert of J. Balvin was finished.
AREA-3 Promotion Second Anniversary Birthday is this coming Saturday October 10th 2015. This is the most wanted event of the year for our team. Why? Because this is the occasion to gather all the promoters that have been working with us for the past two years together during a special night. Also, because this is a great occasion to invite all our friends and thank them for their loyalty throughout those two years of fun with us.
I am sending this note to everyone to make sure that everyone understands that AREA-3 Promotion is you!! Without you AREA-3 would not exist! Everyone who has been working, and enjoy with us Lima, Barcode and Soundcheck is considered part of the team AREA-3 Promotion Team. Together, thanks to our dedication and ideas, we are able to amuse hundreds of guests every weekend. Let’s keep up with the great work for the months to come. During the night of Saturday Free Salsa classes from 9:30 to 11:15pm will be taught by the teacher Digna Rodrigues followed by a delicious cake which will be served to all our guests.
Please, extend the invitation to all your friends!
Thank you for your cooperation to this event.