Newsletter at the B....H....Community

Hello A and B and happy Halloween,

B my name is xxxxx xxxxxx and I am following up on the below email that A forwarded to you a few days ago, I would like to know if there is the possibility for me to advertise my services on the B.... H..... newsletter.

I would like to advertise my technical service using the same flyer I use for the  W...... at L.......... Community. See attached sample.
As a matter of fact even this morning another family contacted me for some technical issues with their computers. For this reason I would like to keep offering my services to many more families in your communities.

If requested, I can also provide excellent references from the families that I am currently supporting in your community.

Thank you very much for your attention,
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Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
OK, sorry I didn't see this earlier. Will respond by 1645 UCT. Thanks.
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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Thank you Stephen...
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Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
Here's my first draft; however, please see my comments footnoted with 1,2,3 etc.
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Hello A and B,

(1)

B, my name is xxxxx xxxxxx and I am following up on the below email that A forwarded to you a few days ago. I would like to know if there it is possible for me to advertise my technical service (2)on the B.... H..... newsletter. I would like do so using the same flyer I use for the  W...... at L.......... Community. Please see the attached sample.

As a matter of fact, another family (3) contacted me this morning for some technical issues with their computers. Accordingly, I would like to keep offering my services to many more families in your communities.

If requested, I can also provide excellent references from the families I am currently supporting in your community.

Thank you very much for your attention,
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NOTES:
1.  I removed Happy Halloween b/c I did not think it belonged in a business letter.
2.  Does this technical services have a name?  
3.  Please clarify "another family"...is this another family in the communities to which you wish to advertise? Do these communities include "L.... Community?"?
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Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
Hey Italiabella,

Did you see the above?

Thanks,
Stephen
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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Yes, I saw it. It is excellent. Thank you so much as usual for your great help. and I apologize for the delay in responding.
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Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
My pleasure! No worries per the delay in responding. Glad I was able to help!
Steve
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