Biking in November
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Subject: A very lucky day…
Today, I was biking admiring the beautiful leaves changing colors. When I decided to stop for drinking some water and eating an apple. All the sudden, a fearless “bambi” came out from the wood asking for a bite of my apple…. So I gave it to him….
Subject: A very lucky day…
Today, I was biking admiring the beautiful leaves changing colors. When I decided to stop for drinking some water and eating an apple. All the sudden, a fearless “bambi” came out from the wood asking for a bite of my apple…. So I gave it to him….
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In whole my life this is the first time that a wild little dear come close to me looking for food. It made me feel special this is why I took some memorably pic and I will shared them with friends...thank you for correcting my paraghaph..all the version are great but I like how crystal said looking at my apple....so I shared...:)
thank you everyone....next I am preparing a newsletter in occasion of thanksgiving for all my clients....coming next for grammar revision.......