Router Upgrade for Jan

Hello Whitney,

My name is xxxxxx xxxxxx and I am a computer engineer. I am helping Jan and Everett xxxxx  to improve their home network. As a part of the new home network solution, I have recommended also a Claud storage solution in which they will store all their data. For this device to work must be plugged in directly in to the router, not into a switch or access point like the current setup they have now. This is why I recommended to upgrade to the latest dual band wireless router that Comcast deliver to all his customers. The upgrade is free and very quick to schedule. This new  router will be moved to their new apartment once the new apartment will be finished.

Thank you for your understanding about this matter,

If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me.  Thank you in advance.
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Joe WinogradDeveloperCommented:
Hi Italiabella,
I should be able to get to this in the next half-hour or so. Regards, Joe
Joe WinogradDeveloperCommented:
Hi Italiabella,
My rewrite is below. Relatively few changes this time — you did a great job! Regards, Joe


Hello Whitney,

My name is xxxxxx xxxxxx. I am a computer engineer who is helping Jan and Everett xxxxx to improve their home network. As part of the new home network solution, I recommended a Cloud storage device to store all their data. For this device to work, it must be plugged directly into the router, not into a switch or access point, like the current setup they have now. This is why I recommended an upgrade to the latest dual-band wireless gateway/router that Comcast delivers to all their customers. The upgrade is free and very quick to schedule. This modern Comcast gateway/router will be moved to Jan and Everett's new apartment as soon as it is finished.

Thank you in advance for your understanding in this matter. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely,

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ItaliabellaAuthor Commented:
Finally I am improving my writing :)
Joe WinogradDeveloperCommented:
Absolutely!
Stephen KairysTechnical Writer - ConsultantCommented:
Italiabella - The more you write, the more you will improve. Keep up the good work! :)
Steve
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