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Until today I am under the assumption that,  Row over this matter concluded long before. After getting your call yesterday, understand apparently  it was not true.

A  month before, when you whatsup me asking about my whereabouts to receive a call from your Uncle , during the discussion I express my un-willingness to involve in this subject.
I tried to explain you  soon after I done with that call, for some reason you couldn’t pick up my call.  However, I did a message to you.

It appears me, the issue is complicated to resolve dispute between agents.
(In first place, Who are we to manage that !!) It is their personal call.

As I am just being a customer, not our part to involve to manage relation between the agents.

As I am here in ABC, my family who manage finances at home-xyz city, If I explain them,  I am sure they will get more confuse & concern about the things going behind the scene and embroil in this matter.. ..which is not healthy!!!!!!!!!.
As the latest example yesterday, when you called me, unknowingly, implicitly you got into this subject. it is going to expand with non-actors which is going to create lot of head-ache who has no role to play in house dealing & agents personal issues.

Having said that, As we already been at the burden of getting house at expensive rate for just single portion,which is attached to a function palace hotel which is typically a very noisy place, which is huge drawback... ..but have to compromise for the time. However, it is personal thing I agree.
For that reason, we kept this option out from our choice to finalize, and then delayed almost 7 Months to contemplate whether to buy that house.

One of my relative, who manage real-estate & construction business , in xyz locality,  advise me to keep myself  away from agent disputes.

As you have seen me last year during the house handover in ABC city, how I kept away discussing finance matter,  even before to come to our discussion itself. To make sure not to give you even little inconvenience.

Hope you understand ,I am sure it will not create misunderstanding between us because of others personal issues,  and expecting that, you will take this forward too !!!

However, It very lengthy, took away time during office hours(which is bad),  to put down my concern as BEST as possible to explain you more comprehensively , for just you are being my friend.

Hope you got it all now !!!
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Until today, I was under the assumption that the Row over this matter had been concluded. After getting your call yesterday, I now understand this is apparently not true.

 A  month before, when you sent me a [[Whatsup]] message me asking about my whereabouts to receive a call from your Uncle , I expressed to you my unwillingness to be involved in this subject.  I tried further to explain to you soon after I was done with the first call, but for some reason you couldn’t pick up my call.  However, I did message you.

 It appears me that this issue is complicated to resolve disputes between agents. It was their personal call and as such it really cannot involve us. As I am just a customer, it is not our part to manage the relations between the agents.

 Since I am here in ABC, my family manages finances at home in xyz city, If I explain all this to them,  I am sure they will get more confused and concerned about the things going behind the scene and may then try to get embroiled in this matter (which is not healthy!)

 In the latest example yesterday, when you called me, you again got into this subject. It is going to expand with non-actors and will create lot of headaches for those who have no role to play in house dealing and the personal issues of agents.

 Having said that, As we have already been burdened getting the house at an expensive rate for just a single portion, that is attached to a hotel which is typically a very noisy place.  This is a huge drawback, but we have to compromise for the time being. However, it is personal thing, I agree.

 For that reason, we kept the option (our choice) to finalize, and then we delayed almost 7 months to contemplate whether to buy that house.

 One of my relative, who manages real-estate and construction businesses in xyz locality,  advised me to keep away from agent disputes.

 As you have seen this last year during the house handover in ABC city, that I kept away discussing finance matters,  even before this discussion occurred. This was to make sure not to inconvenience you.

I hope you understand , I am sure it will not create misunderstanding between us because of the personal issues of others,  and expecting that,  you must take this forward.

 However, It very lengthy, it took away time from my office hours (which is bad),  to convey my concerns as best as I could to explain to you very comprehensively , as you are my friend.

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This was very complicated, I made a lot of changes to make the message read smoothly. Please read carefully and make sure I have not changed your meaning.
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I must appreciate your patience  John !!!

Thank you so much !!
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You are very welcome and I was pleased to help you.

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