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Tech Writing - Alternate Term for "New Feature"

Hi,

When we add a new feature to our web application, I insert a "NEW FEATURE" banner into the appropriate page. e.g.

NEW FEATURE: The system now supports reciting pi out to 20 decimal places. Click here for details.

I'm now documenting a change to existing functionality and want to announce this update in a similar manner. But, it's not a new feature. What would be a viable alternate term? ENHANCEMENT? SOFTWARE CHANGE? <Something else?>

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Thank you both.

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1. Your example shows a table, but I assume NEW or IMPROVED apply to a banner at the top of a page?
2. So, if I had a parameter that previously had two possible settings and now supports four possible settings, would that one be IMPROVED? UPDATED?
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For (2) it would depend.

If you had previously:  High or Low

Now you have:  Very high, High, Low, Very Low

then I would say it is IMPROVED.


Conversely, if you had before:  Enabled or Disabled

and you now have:  Enabled (All Users), Enabled (Specified Users), Disabled (Specified Users), Disabled (All Users)

then it would likely be NEW feature.


I guess you just have to do it on a case by case basis and try to be fair and objective.  Keep the marketing and sales people away - else everything will just become NEW & IMPROVED

:-)

Alan.
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For (2)
If my original choices (fake example) were:
Apple, Pear, Grape, Plum (which are all fruits)
and Development added Lettuce, Squash, Kale (veggies, of course), then I think NEW applies.

Along other lines, if a default value is changed to be more beneficial to the user, I suspect IMPROVED fits the bill.
Agree?
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> Your example shows a table, but I assume NEW or IMPROVED apply to a banner at the top of a page?

No. It applies to each feature in the table. For example, "Support shared network folders" is a NEW feature in PaperPort Professional 14 (and not in PaperPort 14); "Customizable Scanner Profiles" is an IMPROVED feature in both PaperPort 14 (five Profiles) and PaperPort Professional 14 (unlimited Profiles).

> if I had a parameter that previously had two possible settings and now supports four possible settings, would that one be IMPROVED? UPDATED?

Both words are fine, imo, and so is ENHANCED.

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@Joe.
OK, we're dealing not dealing with a table of functions here, but a single document. With a NEW FEATURE banner up top. So, I need terminology that looks "good" on the banner. I can live with UPDATED as a heading.

UPDATED: The "Side Dish" field now supports veggies.
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Ended up going with ENHANCEMENT (the noun), to be consistent with NEW FEATURE, which I've been using dating back about a year.

Will review now and assign points. Thanks!
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Thanks, everyone. I realize this question was somewhat subjective. However, your guidance helped me find clarity, and will ENHANCE the quality of my UPDATED and IMPROVED document. :)
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hehe...good one!
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