proofread : make better paragraph about PR processing questionnaire

I am planing to have a visit to my home town next month for 3 weeks.
presently I have only few scan copies, about my experience and Education.

If I miss to arrange the required certs in this visit, then,my subsequent visit would be only after 5 months.

therefore, please let me know

1)Full-list of documents required to have, to procede for PR

2)Do you consider any reduction of processsing fee

3)If I am fortunate to get the PR, I wish to take my family only after spending some amount of time,to make myself comfortable.
  In such scenario, please let me know whether I have to pay the dependents fee upfront ?
 
4) My graduation is from an Autonous college  which Affliated from   , Post Graduation Engg college affliated directly from XX University.
   In such case, which is better option to show about my education details, Graducation/post graduation ?.
   I am not sure whether I can get the required transcripts for my graduation in my case.
   
5)I have been working in current Organization/Role since 2 yrs.
   My current job contract most likely end by coming Dec,
   Once I left from here, little difficult to procure the documents that I may be needed for our PR-processing
   please advice, what kind of documents I may be needed from current organization.
   
   Kindly refer my brief  biodata submiited to you to advice me further
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
Try this:

I am planning to have visit my home town next month for 3 weeks. Presently I have a few copies about my experience and Education.

If I miss arranging the required certificates in this visit, then my subsequent visit would be 5 months later, so I would like to make my application now.

Therefore, please let me know:

1)      The full list of documents required to have in order to proceed for with an application for Permanent Residency.
2)      Is there any reduction available for the processing fee in special circumstances?
3)      If I am fortunate to obtain Permanent Residency, I wish to bring my family after spending time to make myself comfortable. In this case, please let me know whether I have to pay the fee for dependent fee upfront.
4)      My graduation is from an Autonous college. Post Graduation from Engg college affiliated with XX University.     This needs to be rewritten with names to make sense.
In such case, which is better option to show about my education details, Graduation/post graduation  Delete this comment.  Always better to show just the formal graduation results.
I am not sure whether I can get the required transcripts for my graduation in my case.
5)      I have been working in my current Organization and Role for 2 years.  Describe the role.

My current job contract most likely end by this coming December 2018. Once I leave from here it will be more difficult to procure the documents that I may be needed for our Permanent Residency processing.

Please advise what documents I need from my current organization.
   
Kindly refer to my brief  biographical information that I submitted to you and advise me of any further requirements
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BillDLCommented:
Corrections to proofread results:

"I am planning to have visit my home town ..."

"The full list of documents required to have in order to proceed for with an application for Permanent Residency."

"... please let me know whether I have to pay the fee for dependant fee upfront."

"My current job contract [WILL] most likely end by this coming December 2018. Once I leave from here it will be more difficult to procure the documents that  I   may be needed for our Permanent Residency processing."
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JohnBusiness Consultant (Owner)Commented:
@mac_g: Thanks and good luck with your application.
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thanks for your wishes
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