proof-read : spot grammatical mistake if there any

yesterday I received an update about my education credentials status.
One of the transcript not been accepted mentioned the below-given reason.
===  reason ==
XXX
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Kindly advise, Shall I send you the photocopy of a statement of marks sheet which has the clear visibility to support my - "Statement of Marks-Transcript" submitted to you earlier.
mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAsked:
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Erin WestContent Marketer & CopywriterCommented:
Hi there!

Not sure to whom you'll be sending this, but here are some suggested edits:

____________________

To Whom It May Concern:

Yesterday I received an update on the status of my education credentials. One transcript has not been accepted. The following reason was given for rejecting the submission:

--reason---

I am happy to send you a photocopy of this transcript, showing clear support of its validity. Please advise if this is the correct course of action to get this issue resolved.

Sincerely,

---name--

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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thank you so much Erin.
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