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Hello,

This is to inform you that, I have not received the -  Day-21 Evening lesson again.
Can you please kindly check again, whether my below number has added to your whatsup broadcast list.

my num # +1234567  ( Make sure '+' sign before the number).

Making you uncomfortable daily with reminders to send me lessons individually , I am feeling apologetic for that.

Just for Info, my cell has always been connected to High-Speed 4g, and it is a Samsung Note.
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Hello,

This is to inform you that I have not received the Day 21 Evening lesson - again.
Can you please kindly check again, whether my below number has been added to your "Whatsup" broadcast list.

My number is  +1 234567  ( Make sure '+' sign before the number).  [[+1 is normally followed by a space]]

I understand that making you feel uncomfortable daily with reminders to send me lessons individually , I am feeling apologetic for that.  However, I do need the lessons from you.

For your Information, my cell phone number has always been connected to High-Speed 4g, and the phone is a Samsung Note.

Thank you for your assistance.
Shaun VermaakTechnical Specialist
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Hello,

This is to inform you that I have not received the Day 21 Evening lesson - again.
Can you please kindly check again whether my number below has been added to your WhatsApp broadcast list?

My number is  +1 234567  (Make sure '+' sign before the number).

I understand that I make you feel uncomfortable with my daily reminders to send me lessons individually. I apologize for that, however, I do need the lessons from you.

For your Information, my cell phone number has always been connected to High-Speed 4G, and the phone is a Samsung Note.

Thank you for your assistance.
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Thank you so much @John & @Shaun !!!
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You are very welcome and good luck with getting lessons.

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