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============ Writing email to my previous company-ABC HR, Requesting her for employment refernce letters for my PR process  =======

It has been long time since I left the organisation. I must say experience with ABC had been wonderful, and its transparent HR process.
Still I miss the annual gatherring parties.Hope such parties still ABC keeping alive.

regarding reference letters I requested for my PR...
you might have provided such reference letters so far, for many PR aspirants. I didn't exactly get the reason for the delay getting requested letter.
If the reason for my employment,  my experience letters sent you in earlier communication, hope that will give you enough details.
More details you can get from your internal employee database.

About my job roles,as a IT Consultant,the document sent you mentioned most generic roles not to make it complicated.

I am waiting for your letters to procede next level of processing for my PR processing.

I am sure, you will help me getting the required documents in this regard, also wishes me to succeed.

I really appreciate your help
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Dear __________

It has been long time since I left your organization. My experience with ABC was wonderful including its transparent HR process. [[explain this]] Still I miss the annual gathering parties, and I hope such parties continue to help keep ABC vibrant.

On another note, I had earlier requested reference letters from you.  You might have provided such reference letters for many P__ R___  aspirants. Accordingly I am not certain why there was a delay getting the letter I requested of you . I hope the experience details I provided will provide adequate information, and you can get more information from your internal employee database. With respect to my roles as an IT Consultant, the document that I sent you mentioned most generic responsibilities in order not to make it complicated.

I am waiting for your response to proceed to the next level of processing for my P____ R_____ processing. I feel confident that you will help me obtain the required documents in this regard, and also wish me to succeed.

Thank you for your assistance and I do appreciate it.
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@John .. You answer me exactly what I needed.

Keep this spirit extending help to others !!

Thank you so much !!!
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Good. And I was happy to help
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