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========= Seeking clarifications about documents  for my PR process ============
regarding ABC company experience ...I hope to get the "Roles and responsibilities" on their letter head very soon for my PR process.

Apart from above, I have  1) Exp letter & 2) Reliving letter, with me.

ABC is a human resources consultancy,  and no contemporary consultants are currently in touch.I used to depend on ABC only for my HR related needs.
whereas their customer-- "IDB bank"where I had worked ,  I have known contacts.
 
Hope the above three documents are sufficient.

please advice
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With respect to  ABC company experience, I hope to get the "Roles and responsibilities" document that related to me on their letter head very soon for my PR process.

Separately, I have an Experience letter and a Reliving (?? reference??) letter with me.  [[ change this]]

ABC is a human resources consultancy,  and no contemporary consultants are currently in touch with me. I used to depend on ABC for my HR related needs, however, I did work at their customer "IDB bank"  and  I have known contacts there.
 
I hope the above three documents will be sufficient for you.

Please advise as soon as is practical for you to respond.
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@John , you are special .. thanks  Lot !!
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