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== Requesting company HR to share contact details of my previous colleagues ===

I am John,former colleague of David, who is working as Project Manager in your organization, had been associated with him during our previous job role with HP, Florida.
I would need to reach him for some personal purpose.

Kindly advice  ..
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Andrew LeniartSenior EditorCommented:
Do you know his full name?

Tried a search on LinkedIn for a profile there to try and get back in touch?
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Rob HensonFinance AnalystCommented:
Try this instead:

I am a former colleague of David, who is working as a Project Manager in your organization. I was working with him on an assignment with HP, Florida and need to contact him for personal reasons.

Please can you forward my details to him and request that he contact me as soon as possible.

You will need to provide David's surname as well as there is no doubt more than one David in the organisation. It might also be worth giving dates for the HP assignment.

The HR department will not be allowed to release David's details to you but they may be able to pass on your request for David to contact you.
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mac_gAdmin - Oracle Fusion Middleware suiteAuthor Commented:
Thank U @Rob,
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