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Uncle's lackadaisical attitude getting things even worse for each passing day to get our due share from the joint property, on which PAUL lifeline solely depended on. The delay made us to lose all Govt benefits for every now and then, very lately allowances which has started giving away for every 6 months based on size of land, and typical loan waivers offered when every new Govt assumes the office, which has been going on since ages. The sum total so far has been very huge and counterproductive so far to NASAR progress too. If this situation lingers for more time, In the prevailing social landscape, and with the changing Govt policies with the time, then it is almost impossible to dream to get the due share in property our lifetime. This effect already visible in the form of huge mistrust brewing while distributing crop share amount to relevant shareholders. For all these kind of nonsensical things I hold him responsible.

In conclusion, Let Uncle react positive to culminate property distribution process, the subsequent process would be transparent everyone to see how to plan their future support system and needs. This is an opportunity to all of us, what they are going to own vis-a-vis Needed in future, else Uncle has to take care of all expenses End-2-End for GIRL1 marriage and also for one more similar on the cards offing now. Now entire onus lies on him. Otherwise, we have to end up supporting 2 families for the lifetime for their needs even post education period also(Which I am doing for XXX family now), like usual old age medical expenses and unforeseen overhead may come across anytime in their life period.

If this not make it to happen at this point of juncture, I am sure it will never happen in future. Reason is, the situation will not arise in future to make a strong case to come out of this Hell. This also lead to ramifications such as, property will become dormant, eventually slip into the hands of anonymous people in such limbo kind of scenario, embolden them even to confiscate. If that arises, None have time to fight and protect the property. This option can even guess by a novice who has basic awareness about the present social fabric, and this can't be ruled out at all.
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Try this below. I did make a number of changes.
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Uncle's lackadaisical attitude is causing things to get even worse each passing day for us to get our due share from the joint property, on which PAUL's lifeline solely depends. The delay made us lose all Government benefits every so often, because allowances and other benefits have changes whenever a new Government assumes office (which has been going on for ages). The sum total so far has been very large, and counterproductive to NASAR's progress as well. If this situation is allowed to linger longer, and in the prevailing social landscape as well as changing Government policies, then it will be almost impossible to dream of getting the due share of the property in our lifetime. This effect already visible in the form of the mistrust brewing while distributing crop share amount to relevant shareholders. I hold my uncle responsible for all of this.

In conclusion, let Uncle react positively to complete the property distribution process. Then the subsequent process will be transparent to everyone to see how to plan their future support systems and needs. This is an opportunity for all of us to see what we are going to own, otherwise Uncle will have to take care of all expenses for GIRL1's marriage and also for similar expenses coming up. Now the entire onus lies on him. Otherwise, we will end up supporting 2 families for their lifetime, for their needs, after their education is complete, and also the usual old age medical expenses and other unforeseen expenses.

If this not made to happen at this point, I feel certain it will never happen in future. The reason is that the situation will not arise in future to make a strong case to resolve this mess. This will also lead to the possibility property will become dormant and may slip into the hands of anonymous people, allowing them to confiscate the property. If that arises, none of us will have time to fight to protect the property. This option cannot be ruled out.
Shaun VermaakTechnical Specialist
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Based on the above

Uncle's lackadaisical attitude is causing things to get even worse each passing day for us to get our due share from the joint property, on which PAUL's lifeline solely depends. The delay made us lose all Government benefits every so often because allowances and other benefits have changes whenever a new Government assumes office (which has been going on for ages). The sum total so far has been very large, and counterproductive to NASAR's progress as well. If this situation is allowed to linger longer, and in the prevailing social landscape as well as changing Government policies, then it will be almost impossible to dream of getting the due share of the property in our lifetime. This effect already visible in the form of the mistrust brewing while distributing crop share amount to relevant shareholders. I hold my uncle responsible for all of this.

In conclusion, let Uncle react positively to complete the property distribution process. Then the subsequent process will be transparent to everyone to see how to plan their future support systems and needs. This is an opportunity for all of us to see what we are going to own, otherwise, Uncle will have to take care of all expenses for GIRL1's marriage and also for similar expenses coming up. Now the entire onus lies on him. Otherwise, we will end up supporting 2 families for their lifetime, for their needs, after their education is complete, and also the usual old age medical expenses and other unforeseen expenses.

If this not made to happen at this point, I feel certain it will never happen in future. The reason is that the situation will not arise in future to make a strong case to resolve this mess. This will also lead to the possibility property will become dormant and may slip into the hands of anonymous people, allowing them to confiscate the property. If that arises, none of us will have time to fight to protect the property. This option cannot be ruled out.
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Dear, @John, @Shaun Vermaak,
U both are awesome.


Thank you !!
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Thank you and I was happy to help. Good luck finding a solution to the property.

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