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proofread : correct/polish the same paragraph

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which is correct sentence and why

1)
There are possible risks, but nonetheless, we feel it’s a sound investment;
-OR-
There are possible risks, nonetheless, we feel it’s a sound investment;

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2)
Their team hadn’t lost a game the entire season. but Nevertheless, we beat them by a huge margin last night;
-OR-
Their team hadn’t lost a game the entire season. Nevertheless, we beat them by a huge margin last night;
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Megan Clark
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