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proofread : correct/polish the same paragraph

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The reason why I asked this, After having brief evaluation of the candidate profile and finds any merit in that, as a next step candidate is going be enrolled.
once they kick-off the processing typically follow a rule that, if the candidate doesn't succeed getting visa within defined timeframe they consider returning some percentage of processing fee ?

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I prefer to have consultation UAE time, between 4PM-10PM ?
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Is it an email or formal letter?
What am I proof reading for you?

The reason why I asked this, After having brief evaluation of the candidate profile and finds any merit in that, as a next step candidate is going be enrolled.
once they kick-off the processing typically follow a rule that, if the candidate doesn't succeed getting visa within defined timeframe they consider returning some percentage of processing fee ?
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@Jackie Man, it is formal email !

@Alex Green, Edit the same existing content and make it error free
I'm going to be honest, I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to write in the first place, I've read it time and time again and it just doesn't make any sense.

I can't fix what I can't understand, could you please try to explain and I'll help further, rather than trying to make it sound good, make it super basic and I'll enhance that.

Regards

Alex
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@Alex,This all about a candidate enrolled in a firm to process for a visa. He wants to seek clarification about refundable fee incase if he doen't succeed getting visa.
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@Alex Green , Thanks for your reply.
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