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This is further to our discussion yesterday, regarding my new medical policy upgrade.
It was wonderful taking with you yesterday. I am amazed to see your swift response in this regard for helping your team members, by having a phone call to my medical provider to consider my case positively.
As you advised me, I am sending this email to remind you, to report my obligations officially by an email. As I informed, I would prefer my new policy should cover- ABC hospital, where my ENT treatment has been going on.
I am ready to pay the differential amount that may be needed, My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer.
Your support is highly appreciated in this regard.
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It was wonderful taking with you yesterday. I am amazed to see your swift response in this regard for helping your team members, by having a phone call to my medical provider to consider my case positively.
As you advised me, I am sending this email to remind you, to report my obligations officially by an email. As I informed, I would prefer my new policy should cover- ABC hospital, where my ENT treatment has been going on.
I am ready to pay the differential amount that may be needed, My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer.
Your support is highly appreciated in this regard.
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I want to make a point for the above sentence as- my previous employer used to manage my policy upgrade if I pay difference of amount, where as the new employer not.
Still following sentence not stands to the context - "My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer"
Still following sentence not stands to the context - "My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer"
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@John, Thanks Lot !
You are very welcome and I am always happy to help you.
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....My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer.