Link to home
Start Free TrialLog in
Avatar of mac_g
mac_gFlag for Saudi Arabia

asked on

proofread : correct/polish the same paragraph

This is further to our discussion yesterday, regarding my new medical policy upgrade.
It was wonderful taking with you yesterday. I am amazed to see your swift response in this regard for helping your team members, by having a phone call to my medical provider to consider my case positively.

As you advised me, I am sending this email to remind you, to report my obligations officially by an email. As I informed, I would prefer my new policy should cover- ABC hospital, where my ENT treatment has been going on.

I am ready to pay the differential amount that may be needed, My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer.

Your support is highly appreciated in this regard.

==
SOLUTION
Avatar of John
John
Flag of Canada image

Link to home
membership
This solution is only available to members.
To access this solution, you must be a member of Experts Exchange.
Start Free Trial
Avatar of mac_g

ASKER

@John, Is there any wrong in below snippet of my question, Apparently looks me good. advise, please
....My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer.
SOLUTION
Link to home
membership
This solution is only available to members.
To access this solution, you must be a member of Experts Exchange.
Start Free Trial
Avatar of mac_g

ASKER

I want to make a point for the above sentence as- my previous employer used to manage my policy upgrade if I pay difference of amount, where as the new employer not.
Still following sentence not stands to the context - "My arrangement had been the same with my previous employer"
ASKER CERTIFIED SOLUTION
Link to home
membership
This solution is only available to members.
To access this solution, you must be a member of Experts Exchange.
Start Free Trial
Avatar of mac_g

ASKER

@John, Thanks Lot !
You are very welcome and I am always happy to help you.